Ryan, you started off well, but you had a relapse (i.e., went off on a diatribe again). I think you may be improving, but you've been sounding bitter lately.
Remember...
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. - William Strunk, Jr.
Googled it. Taken from the web site at the Museum of Science and Industry in Chicago, where most of the content of the article appears to have been lifted:
"It will delight you with its tiny treasures—including murals and paintings painted by Walt Disney himself; chandeliers adorned with real diamonds, emeralds and pearls; the tiniest bible ever to be written, dating back to 1840; and ancient statues more than 2,000 years old."
Did they try his armpits?
Remember...
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. - William Strunk, Jr.
It's not a case of "not THAT creative". Dressing sloppy doesn't make you creative.
The New York aspect is so prominent, that one can only imagine it was ripped from somewhere else, and had "world" tacked on after.
Googled it. Taken from the web site at the Museum of Science and Industry in Chicago, where most of the content of the article appears to have been lifted:
"It will delight you with its tiny treasures—including murals and paintings painted by Walt Disney himself; chandeliers adorned with real diamonds, emeralds and pearls; the tiniest bible ever to be written, dating back to 1840; and ancient statues more than 2,000 years old."
I would hope the Museum has done its research.