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The speech this comes from goes on for about 5 pages and is written extremely well

Except she completely fails the whole "show, don't tell" rule for writing. Whatever the agenda of a novel, an author should not ever have characters lecturing the reader for pages on end.
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Well, since all the analysis involving the numeric data about this car have been done, I'll just say: do they deliberately try to make cars like these look ridiculous? This one in particular strikes me as a "clown shoe."
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