The animation is brilliant. I particularly liked the proper intertia of the character movement -- including how it changed in space. And I liked the realistic rendering of the planets, many of which were recognizable... Neptune, Ganymede, and so on. The entire piece had a great look.
Even the squirrel-cow, which looked like something from a child's imagination, conveyed the feeling of presence, as if there were a deeper mind behind the toy face.
But as far as the pacing and logical flow of the story, well yes, it could have been better. It was a strong and emotional message, but the delivery could have been tighter.
Even the squirrel-cow, which looked like something from a child's imagination, conveyed the feeling of presence, as if there were a deeper mind behind the toy face.
But as far as the pacing and logical flow of the story, well yes, it could have been better. It was a strong and emotional message, but the delivery could have been tighter.
Looking forward to seeing your next piece.