Daryl H's Comments
It may just be a carefully formulated commercial, but everyone should have friends like the ones depicted. Messages you WANT to believe are very powerful :) Enjoying a good stout doesn't hurt either :) :) :)
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Readers have to make long reaches to solve this story as written. Couldn't Wally Bell have stuffed the plans down the chute as the last item when he was stuffing envelopes in the mail slot? To presume there was the plans would be at the bottom of the pile of mail is based on the assumption that no one else placed mail in the box prior to the murder. In my office, mail is constantly being put in the box through out the day in varying amounts. How are the readers to infer that Sherman was setting up Arvin Boren? There is a 5 minute gap in the story and there is no narrative that Arvin moved from the spot he was being interviewed from.
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The Empire Sacks Back, black, lrg